Talk: Gwaren

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Great to see some info on a new town, but I couldn’t quite work out this sentence.

Yet, after the disastrous attempt at attacking West Hill the rebel army retreated there and the usurper laid siege to the town.

I changed it to make clear that it is the rebels attacking West Hill (which seems to be what other articles say), but where is the “there” are they retreating to? The sentence almost seems to imply that it’s West Hill, but that doesn’t seem right and is the usurper laying siege to Gwaren? Can he do this because the rebel forces have been depleted by West Hill? I haven’t read the book so I’m not sure myself. On that note, are spoiler tags warranted for people concerned about Stolen Throne spoilers? I didn’t even realise I was reading about the book until it was too late! But on the other hand, I guess the information won’t be secret when the game begins hmmm… Loleil 01:58, 13 April 2009 (UTC)