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Most people think the Antaam are like other Qunari. But that is not true now that they've broken away from the Qun. They are very different.
You could strengthen your thesis by adding, "in their attitudes toward the Qun and towards bas (foreigners)."
Normal Qunari think the Qun is like a map or guide. The Antaam think of it as orders.
Could use more details. Orders must be followed or broken, while a map is a constant source of guidance.
Normal Qunari want to convert bas. Antaam want to kill them.
I will add reading to your list regarding our people's war with Tevinter.
In conclusion: normal Qunari just want to live their lives. Antaam want to kill everyone.
We will work on adding specific examples next time.