Talk:A Stranger Rift in the Ruins

My rewriting
I want to explain my changes to the walkthrough and some of the rest, and am thinking, the summary doesn't have sufficient space … -- -- You talkin' to me? -- cCContributions -- 02:18, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
 * added exact location to IB
 * fixed spelling in Blockquote as per source
 * the quest appears by nearing the rift, through some companion remark; Examining isn't a requirement
 * some extended wording in the first part of the WT
 * "picking up the Tempest magic staff …" – hm, changed this to the offered action in-game, "Take Staff", and at that moment you know nothing of "Tempest"
 * Though I had to look up "thaw", and though I usually don't change wording that uses correct terms, I don't knew until then, this section had to be changed: as it was written before, the impression was created that you now have to fight through all these demons you saw before frozen in time – and what about the Tevinters? Those aren't the demons from before, the ruins have fallen back into the present – and you will encounter demons that have only recently crossed the Veil. (And far fewer!)
 * Unfortunately I have to place a Confirm tag at the second wave, because I blew two demons away with Dispel before I could see what type they were.
 * Yes, the reward is given two times, only the Influence shows up as one value.
 * The yet red Keystone will be upped and created by me soon.
 * add Notable loot